Here I am, revising the chapter of doom (chapter 2) again. Yesterday I rewrote it for about the sixth time. I think I finally have it on track this time--no really! The story needed a boost to bring the action and *achem* action along sooner, so I stripped Chapter 2 out completely and restructured it completely. By doing this it seems to have fixed any POV problems. Hm.
Anyway, it finally, finally blends with the rest of the story, but I'm thinking it will still need some clean up later on. I added a lot more character interaction and I always tweak snogging sessions to death before submission.
Well, maybe I'll be able to rest a bit easier now. This is the one chapter holding me back from finishing this thing, and good god! will I be glad when it's done.