I had a bit of a writing dilemma today. I editing Chapter 5 and decided to make a few changes. The question is, how much detail should I add when describing the male character? I usually only sprinkle a few details here and there, but with this particular scene, I wonder if maybe I should add to it.
I wrote the beginning of the scene two different times, but now that I've done it and read over it; it seems the original reads better. Hm.
I'm going to finish out the chapter, and if I'm still undecided, I guess I'll post some of it here and do a test.